I have many different types interests. When I'm with my friend we usually do pick up games of soccer and wonder around town trying to pick up girls. My other interest is listening to hip-hop and writing rap songs.
My friend would say I am
crazy because I like to believe in the impossible ,
loyal because I will always defend my friends no matter the cost,
trust-worthy because I will keep a secret and i have never stole anything in my life,
and stupid Because I trust people way to easy and it gets my self into trouble
I Can See My Dreams
I will succeed
Can nots is not an option
A dream will become reality
Not only will it become reality but goals
Success is what I am after
Especially to have people say my name with pride
Emotions that I could not control I will have control
Maturity growing up and leaving the past behind
Youth things that separate the men and children
dropping these things will bring me one step close to my goal
Repetition and not giving up
especially when the road ahead has many twist and turns
A dream of mine I will not give up
Maybe it will not be the easiest of goals
So I will put my faith in god and pray that one day I can see my dreams
Vitor,
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! Excellent work on this. I like the "name with pride" part.
As for your essay, you need to write more. Try to have at least 5-6 sentences per paragraph. There are many more details about your life, your story, that you need to include. Write more.
Good pictures and design. Try to put a pic at the top of each post to draw your reader in.
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